The Myths of Natural Phenomena

The Myths of Natural Phenomena

The second Saturday discussion and creative prompts centered around natural phenomena: earthquakes, mountain formations, typhoons, etc. Interesting highlights of that discussion were the similarities in tales across mythology and the almost universal need to tell stories of how it happens. Especially the scary stuff. We talked about how in myth, there is a warning to others, a protocol established in face of the immense – Nature, God, what you will.

After we shared our pieces, I asked each of my fellow writers to describe the community in which their pieces took place. They were able to describe in detail the location and kind of setting and people. It always amazes me how much a storyteller has within, that is never directly shared, but is visible to the hearer nonetheless. Because they see it, we see it.

We also had a visitor join us for the final discussion. We think he was attracted to the warmth and color of those awesome pink socks! Anoles like stories too!

Okay, so here is my tale. Please, feel free to share your own in the comments and/or any thoughts you have to continue the discussion.

Zephy and Phyr, Daughters of the North Wind

The North Wind had two daughters and seven sons. He divided his wind duties amongst his sons, giving each of them dominion over each of the seas. His two daughters, the youngest two of his mighty brood, were not assigned any duties. Blustering, bellowing, and blowing were not lady like endeavors, after all.

For the second youngest, Zephy, this was just fine. She wore light colored dresses and walked lazily through the long grass picking up dandelions, letting them drift along with her. She would kiss the faces of the animals she walked by and rustle their fur, feathers, and hair.

Now, Phyr, the youngest, was not sated by this sedate lifestyle. She wore dresses, yes, but they were in grays, blues, and black. She had talents as wonderful as her brothers, and, in some cases, she far excelled their skills. She pleaded with her father to give her more meaningful responsibilities than wearing dresses and walking through fields and forests.

“You are a lady, Phyr.” The North Wind sighed, “There are protocols to follow. I know you’re gifted, and I am proud of you. But, there are rules and dresses are a must for girls.”

“But, I want to do more, and dresses are too restrictive!” Phyr pleaded.

“I’ll tell you what,” her Dad relented, “You may exercise your gifts however you wish, but you must remain in the forests and fields and in a dress.”

Phyr knew not to press her father further and demurred. She went out into the fields to join Zephy. She was not daunted though, and decided to find out what she was working with.

She began to sway right to left and her skirts flowed and filled with air. The grass around her began to bend lower to the ground, swaying with her. Phyr’s heart began to beat a little faster. She raised up arms, stretching them out away from her, and she began to twirl. Faster and faster she spun; she lifted off the ground and her hair streamed around her. She laughed and laughed, and spun and spun. When she slowed and lowered to the ground she laughed dizzily and bent down to regain her composure. Then she lifted up, Zephy was standing in front of her looking a little disheveled herself.

“Phyr! look what you’ve done!”

Looking back there was a line of destruction – pulled up roots, flowers, and grass. Animals stumbled to their feet and looked around dazed. Phyr looked around, still panting, and stared wide-eyed at her sister saying, “That was awesome!”

What to do to do to do?

What to do to do to do?

I was looking through my poetry folder today, and I came across this misfiled note. and then I thought- maybe not?

Things that need doing. Spring 2019 found again in Fall 2020

Taxes
Canceling the Y
Creating Job descriptions
Can C’s’ job include student behavior?
Printing emails
Talking to student – J, again.

Teacher & Admin reviews for next year
Get earplugs
Clear the clutter
Shut out the noise
Paperwork, paperwork, paperwork
Let the dog in.

Cinquain: A Form For Patience?

Cinquain: A Form For Patience?

How many times must I say this? How many times until you learn? How many times until you trust me? How many times is enough? How many? Ah, the frustration of repetition. I just said that! We have gone over this a million times. I have it figured out, why not you?
Funny, you would think I would have learned by now…
When I was finishing my PhD thesis, I submitted it for review by the department head. If he gave it the a-okay, it went to final submission and then to the Viva or oral defense. I had used my official name on the thesis, a name which very few people knew me as, including our department head. I don’t know if this would have altered some of the more abrasive comments about my lack of clarity or the missing elements, but I’d like to think so. I had been working on this thesis for 7 years and I had thought I was done. I was not. Once I picked myself up off the floor, and had a good cry at my Mum’s, I went back to my supervisor to see what was salvageable.
The main issue was that I had left out a discussion of an intrinsic foundational argument. The lead up to or history of the subject if you will. At first, I was affronted, of course I had laid that foundation. It was all there in black and white, what was he talking about?
Alas, sometimes when you sit with a subject for so long and you know the ins and outs of your thought process so intimately, you fail to see that not all of your ideas and meanings are self-evident to the rest of the world. Nor, for that matter, to your department head.
I’ll admit it hurt. Deeply and emotionally to read some of the remarks made in an off-handed, dismissive tone. My first chapter and beyond peppered with “she fails to see” and “has she even read…?”
What I had failed to see was that I had been unclear in my meaning. My foundation was rushed, so that I might dive into the meat of my argument, the areas that held my fascination and joie de vivre.
I rush. I am impatient. I miss steps. Sometimes in my rush to the good stuff, I leave out a few steps. And it ends up biting me in the tuchus.
Fast forward to my first year teaching – I told my students, “right. Over the weekend, you need to write a 2-5 page paper on the following topic…” I asked, “do you understand?” They nodded their heads, collected their stuff and went on their way. Monday arrived, I held out my hands for their papers and not one, not one student, turned it in. I was livid. “What on earth are you all thinking?!” “What is going on here?” A few brave souls put up their hands and said, “we didn’t know what to do! You didn’t even give us a handout!”
It’s true; I hadn’t. I wasn’t teaching college students anymore. I was teaching high school Sophomores, and they needed a lot more guidance than I had given them. I had failed to see, again. So, I set aside more time for paper prep and as the years passed that time grew and grew. Writing isn’t easy, especially in the beginning! Oh, and the middle, and the end….

I am learning to become less frustrated with repetition. To stop and make sure the foundation is solid before jumping into designing the attic lounge area. Which brings me to another form. A poetic form that works on a step-by-step process of poem making. It is short, sweet, and specific. A good form to practice a “one foot before the other” process.

A cinquain is a five line stanza. There are three separate forms that qualify as cinquains and each holds a specific purpose.

The first form centers around word count for each line. It may be written about anything. It’s used to describe a person, place, or thing.

Line1: One word
Line2: Two words
Line 3: Three words
Line 4: Four words
Line 5: One word

The second form is strictly about a specific noun, but not (usually) a specific person–in rare occasions, I have seen them about specific objects. For example, it may be about a cup, a specific trophy, a work of art, ect.

Line1: A noun
Line2: Two adjectives
Line 3: Three -”ing” words
Line 4: A phrase
Line 5: Another word for the noun

This third form of cinquain is most easily adapted to various subjects. Its focus is on syllables. Feel free to use it any way you like, just stick to the form.

Line1: Two syllables
Line2: Four syllables
Line 3: Six syllables
Line 4: Eight syllables
Line 5: Two syllables

Finally, here are my attempts at each form of the form:

1.
Love
Pure Joy
Quiet calm devotion
Compassionate true fellow-feeling
Empathy

2.
Stream
Strong, wide
Flowing, Freeing, floating.
It winds ever on –
River

3.
Thunder
Growling in clouds
Waking the sound sleeper
Forcing its way through the night’s sky
Silence

The Last of My Bloods

Standing in the shower
watching the last of my bloods
mix with the water,
– Carrie, thirty years later –

Is this my power
Draining down,
out to return,
welcomed by rivers and oceans?

What does one do to prepare?
For the heat pulsing
in different locations and
the thinning of one’s crown?

Were there rituals we lost
with the movement of the sky down to earth?
Shall I throw a modern-day change indicator?
A fire sale of sorts?

Get it while it’s hot!

  • old eating habits!
  • undrunk shots of tequila!
  • high heel shoes – still in the box!
  • one womb –  like new – never used.

And yet,
as I stoop more often now,
I do find myself closer to the ground
– below the mists –
where the dirt smells its best.

An Ode to Mary Oliver

The blurb on the front cover
of one of her collections
reads, “far and away,
this country’s best-selling poet
.”
And I think, no.
That is not an accolade for a poet.
That is not the accolade for her.
Keep your consumerism far from our girl.
She spoke of nature, and life, and the Divine.
She spoke to us all.

I listen to her words still,
I listen to her words again.

I, too, want to put into words
feelings that swell, then rush away
as I reach for them,
as I stand in my garden
and the hummingbird comes
to demand that I refill the sugar water.
A warning that perhaps next time,
they will not return
due to this slight of a half-filled feeder.

I imagine a younger version of a poet
walking around her kitchen, on a lazy day,
reading my poems aloud,
like prayers to the Almighty,
And sighing out in relief – Amen.

Amen, Mary, amen.

Closer to the Sun

Closer to the Sun
I went down to the lake to
wash my hands.
The waters from the stream
cleansed my feet.
Flowers uplifted my core.
The mountain air filled 
my lungs,
and, closer to the sun,
my tears began to dry.

Oh Monkey*

She’s wary of casting spells.
She knows how these things work –
a spell, a charm, a wish.
Who is it who
brings it to fruition?
So much is risked
in speaking its name –
the laying bare
what desires
rattle in her heart.
You can’t cast a spell
without revelation.
When the moon pulses,
and the earth simmers,
who interprets her bones?
Who is it who?
This is why
you don’t
open the knock
of your dead son’s
return.

*Inspired by Chen Chen’s “Spell to Find Family.”

Secret Garden Dragon

Secret Garden Dragon

Dear J,

I found a dragon today,
in our back yard.
He is hiding himself
as a large cypress tree.
Nevertheless,
I found him today.

I was walking nearby
and glanced upon his eye.
Green, not yellow,
Not white.
Green.
I swear, I saw a gleam.

He was heading toward the earth
at rapid speed,
frozen.
Safe from detection.
His body flowing behind,
Like ribbons
in the form of cypress branches
peeling and shredded
as the wind cut through.

As I moved slowly back, the
whole of him appeared to me
mostly camouflaged
by the sky.

He is the dragon in our backyard,
yet I will not tell what he is.
When asked,
I’ll say, “Why, that is just an old cypress tree.
Funny, how they look like other things.
Like clouds.”
That is what, I’ll say.
But you, me, and the dragon
Know the truth.

PS – I also found a sparrow
hidden in a piece of burnt wood,
but that is a story for another day.

The Taken Tree

The Taken Tree

Written 12/20/2016

They say tonight,
will be the darkest night
in five hundred years,
Two other stories
I read about recently
brought me Anxiety and Sorrow.
I think, they are all connected.

Yesterday I read the headline,
“River of Molten Lead found Under Alaska,
Thought to Help Regulate the Earth’s Magnetic Pull.”
I could not click through
to the whole story –
I felt panic
Dread.
I thought, “oh no.”
Now they’ll use that up too.
And what pull will we have left then?
I felt the apocalypse and for the first time ever
I didn’t chide myself for being melodramatic.

Today, I read a story about a stolen Cedar Tree
In Mobile, Alabama.
Taken from a community park
And dressed up in shiny baubles
To hide a score board
and improve the backdrop
for a scary, little, man.

I read the story this time,
I wanted to hear
about this tree
and it’s gnarly trunk
and those who came to visit it.
And it pained me to hear
of the regular park goers
heading off to work, and returning
with their dogs to find
only a shaven stump.

You know,
I never liked the story “The Giving Tree,”
always thought “that poor tree,”
that little boy just takes and takes
until there is nothing left
and that tree is just a stump too.
And I thought,
even as a child,
“What kind of story is this?”
This is not justice.
This is not kindness.
This is abuse!

And here is that story,
Come to life,
And here is that little boy
Grown in size.
And here is the corpse
of the tree, chopped and hauled away.

And what will a man like this
do to a river beneath Alaska
that could untilt the world
and send us into
the next
darkest night?

Yes, I think they are all connected.
These stories and more.
Yet I hope,
I hope tomorrow’s headline
Will tell me that it wasn’t cloudy
in Newgrange,
And the sunrise
shone through on time.